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\\nThis is the second\\xa0of our story critique episodes. The story, "Sixth of the Dusk," is available as part of SHADOWS BENEATH, the Writing Excuses anthology, which includes the finished story (obviously) and the version we critiqued in this episode. SHADOWS BENEATH also includes the stories we\'ll be critiquing for the rest of July\'s episodes, and some other pretty cool stuff that you can read about here. If you purchase the hardcover, we\'ll send you the ebook at no additional charge.
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\\nCan you get a lot out of this episode\\xa0without having done the reading? Yes! But we don\'t know what those things will be. Can you get a lot out of this episode without having listened to Part 1? Probably, but here\'s a link to it in case you have doubts.
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\\nHaving covered the stuff we loved in Part 1, this episode is the big downer where we just focus on the problems we found. But hey, that\'s how stories get to be better! We start with the big ones, and then work our way back up to the little things.
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\\nWe\\xa0recorded this episode live at last year\'s Out of Excuses Seminar and Retreat. Our\\xa0audience of awesome attendees\\xa0can be heard cheering when we finally slay the [SPOILERS REDACTED] with our collected powers of [REDACTED AGAIN.]
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