Reading 26: Ch 45 - Nightmares

Published: July 21, 2021, 2:28 a.m.

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I wrote the chapter about nightmare transfer very early when first developing this story, back when I spent significant time in the childhood section.\\xa0 Later I moved this chapter to the end so that Jane could understand John's motivations but also Ray's true empathy for his friend.\\xa0 The latter half of this chapter, the return of a classic character, was one of the last few pages I wrote after two friends (and beta readers) said I needed to close out this part of the story better.\\xa0 I'm so glad I listened.

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