Let's talk about some ways in which your descriptions can do more than just describe. You're not just trying to tell us what the room is like. You're also setting the mood, telling us about the POV character, and establishing some of our progress through the story.
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\nHoward (who rarely works in prose) offers some unexpected insight by talking about the way panels are composed in his comic. Mary offers even better insight by pulling the same principles through the domain of puppetry. Dan tells us how some of this is done by filmmakers. But yes, we finally do come back around to prose and how to accomplish these things with words.
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\nAudiobook Pick-of-the-Week: Shades of Milk and Honey, written and narrated by Mary Robinette Kowal
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\nWriting Prompt: Go someplace, use all five of your senses, and for thirty minutes write about the place you're in. Not the people though. Just the place.
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\nAnd Because It Needs To Be Google-able: "Mary Robinette Koala" -- it might be more than just a pronunciation guide.
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